I made this story by myself. Hope you like it...
One day at the city of Chloroplasto, two friends were being forced to get out of the city because they are not widely accepted at the city. They are Oscar and Ore. They are oxygen molecules that are called “excess” at the city. At that day, they were captured by the Chloro police. After they were captured, they were brought at the borders of the city. They are worried on which way they will go after they were expelled at the city. When they are outside, they saw their other friends that are sipped out. When they saw their friends, they were suddenly sipped by the “Black Hole”. “I don’t know why it is happening to me…” Oscar said. And they were out of the city. When they are out of the city, they thought this is hell but when they see the “real world”, Ore said “What a fantabulous place this would be!” After they’re flying at the “real world”, they saw a tunnel. “What is this huge tunnel?” Oscar said. “Let’s Come in!!!” Ore said. “Freeze you two!!!” The Mucual Police said. “Are you to will invade us again?” The Mucual Chief said (The mucual police and chief are the mucus that filters oxygen and remove foreign invaders). “No! we will not harm you” Oscar said. The Mucual chief detected no invaders in them so the police let them pass. When they’re travelling, they saw some foreign invaders that are trapped with the “finger cells” called cilia. “this place sure is creepy” Oscar said. Then they went to a large “tollgate” called the Pharynx. They are divided into two main highways, the Aero Expressway and the Food Expressway (The food and air tube). The gate officer said that “You are oxygens, you will pass along the Aero Expressway, here are some motorcycles, and you will ride along a large, long highway when you pass in this tollgate”. And they pass at the entrance of the Aero Expressway call the Glottis, and glottis also is the entrance of the Food Expressway. After that, they saw a door-like structure that blocks the food expressway for them to pass without losing the track. After that, they saw a large, creepy tunnel-like place on which other foreign invaders are trapped, it is called Trachea. In the trachea, they are moistening. After that, there’s another tollgate that separates the 4 way expressway into 2, it is called Bronchi. There, they are given weapons because they are preparing for a fight between them and they’re greatest enemy, the CO2 or carbon dioxide. After they’re preparing for the fight, the highway is narrowing. “what is this place, it’s narrowing and narrowing!!!” Oscar said. This place is called Bronchioles. After that, they saw a dead end. “What should we do now?” Ore said. “We have weapons right, this is where we will see the CO2’s” Oscar said. “Now we will do is to enter that vessel like place for us to escape in this dead end” Oscar said. They enter to the vessel like place called Capillaries. “There are the CO2’s” Ore said. “We’re CO2’s and we will kill you!!!” the master CO2 said. The Master controllers called the backup for them. The master controllers are the Pons and Medulla Oblongata, which is responsible for the respiratory system. Then the fight continues. The CO2’s were weakening because of the joint forces of Oscar, Ore and the entire backup. And the battle ended and the Oxygen wins the battle. The CO2’s suddenly disappeared. “Where are they going?” Ore asked. “They are going to the city of Chloroplato because they are not needed here in this place” The RBC said. “That is the place on where we’re expelled!!!” Oscar said. “In the Chloroplasto, Oxygen is not needed but in this place, you are really needed because without you Oxygens, this place will collapse and die easily” The RBC said. “Another command from the Master Controller!” The Police said. “We, the Master Controllers, are really pleased to welcome you Oxygens, without you the entire kingdom will collapse and you are welcome to roam around this wonderful kingdom.” The master controllers, Pons and Medulla Oblongata said. “We really thank you masters because if we’re not welcome in here, we will be like nomads, going nowhere” Oscar said. “You are now ready to go to the different regions of this kingdom” The RBC said. “Thank You!!!” Ore said. And they live there happily ever after.
3 comments:
Nice story!!! hope you publish another beautiful story like that!!!
i am a student-teacher..
funny!!^_^i was thinking of making the same story for my topic next week..
i love your story..if you dont mind i will use it as a motivation story for my lesson about respiratory system next week!!
your a great writer..hope you continue writing!!!
thank you!!!^_^
i will copy this for my project.....XD.. tainx..
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